Starting a novelllll (mild TW)

okay so the novel is Between the Lines, its my experience in a teenager's psychiatric hospital, but put into a fictional character. so, with that out of the way... rate the into The walls are a monotonous gray, the air itself reeking with lemon-scented lysol. The dust bunnies in the corner dance slightly from the inconsistent AC unit, kicking on, then off, then right back on again. Everything else blends in to itself, morphing from a room to a conglomerate blob of shades of dark, cold gray. Yet, in the corner, in stark contrast, lies a white hospital bed. A white, industrial hospital bed, with light gray hole-littered blankets atop the matte white mattress—or rather, whatever stiff fabric they staff deems good enough to serve as one. And on top of that all, lies a boy in blue scrubs.